Comments on: A Chat With George http://rafu.com/news/2010/03/a-chat-with-george/ Wed, 23 May 2012 16:50:14 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: jikeda http://rafu.com/news/2010/03/a-chat-with-george/comment-page-1/#comment-6973 jikeda Fri, 12 Mar 2010 21:59:48 +0000 http://rafu.com/news/?p=10532#comment-6973 I re-read the story today (just got back from Tokyo) and I realized my mistake. Thanks for the sharp eye! Appreciate the feedback and I will do my best to sharpen my writing. I re-read the story today (just got back from Tokyo) and I realized my mistake. Thanks for the sharp eye! Appreciate the feedback and I will do my best to sharpen my writing.

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Good effort on “The Zen of Billiards.” At the top of the second column, you begin, “For the past three years, Herndon, Lee and several of the other top WTBA players…….” Reread the previous paragraphs, but you don’t give an inkling on who Lee and the other players are. Wish you’d sharpen up on your writing.

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